Thursday 26 March 2015

Tears Of Joy


On re-reading this I am not entirely certain that it is complete but I am not going to fiddle with it because I still feel that it works.





Tears Of Joy  -  17 Mar 15

Brush dipped in tears
To moisten the paint
Portrait filled with joy
Carried by the tears

I have seen you smile
You have removed
Any tears which may
Have flowed in life





Hope you think it works too.


2 comments:

  1. I DO THINK IT WORKS! IT'S LOVELY AND ROMANTIC ~ I ESPECIALLY LIKE

    "PORTRAIT FILLED WITH JOY"

    BEAUTIFUL SENTIMENT.

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    1. I hoped that this poem would be seen as working. Sometimes it can be seen from too close to be certain.

      Thank you for your Lovely confirmation dani ♥

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