Sunday 8 February 2015

Afternoon Bay


A weather observation during a visit to Penzance [Cornwall, UK] on a rather chill day.





Afternoon Bay  -  02 Feb 15

Looking out across the bay
The distant shore
Fading out behind the hail
Hard rain arrives
Gulls hide and fools walk
Puddles on the road
Discarded messages
From the clouds






Interesting little point, the last three lines could make a good modern Haikū . . .

Puddles on the road
From the clouds

Discarded messages


2 comments:

  1. "Puddles on the road
    From the clouds
    Discarded messages"

    a stunning Haikū! i also really like ~
    "Gulls hide and fools walk"

    a wonderful poem, Ainsley!

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    1. Thank you for your Lovely comments dani ♥

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