This poem was birthed when the first two lines wandered into my mind. I had no idea from whence they came nor where they would lead and was quite surprised to discover that it became a Love song.
Directions To You - 16 Feb 15
Reaching down
I touch the sky
Within soft curves
Gentle waves
Caressing my mind
As I dream you
Reaching out
I touch you
Whisper soft welcoming
Our hands meet
In a playful dance
Through starlight halls
Reaching up
Beyond thought
Words wrapped in velvet
Presented with a silver kiss
Melting my Heart
And I touch you
I rather like surprise poems.
and i rather love this... i love the way you started each verse with "Reaching" and the ending is perfect.
ReplyDeleteThe first two lines set the tone and it felt right to continue the "Reaching" theme.
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Happy you like the structure and the ending ~ thank you dani ♥
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