Monday 21 October 2013

Afternoon Haze [Senryū}


This was an accidental Senryū ~ I had written three lines and, only later, discovered that I was just a few syllables short of the seventeen needed to create a Senryū.





Afternoon Haze [Senryū]  -  21 Oct 13

Afternoons go on
Forever ~ hazy hours
Drifting in our thoughts





I Love it when things just fall into place.

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2 comments:

  1. i love your haikū and senryū ~ this is exceptional!

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    1. What can I say but ~ thank you for your Lovely comments dani ♥

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