While writing the outro for "Competition" I said "Getting the feeling that this is the first poem of a pair." Within a few moments of posting it here on Muse, the first words of the second poem started to form, so here is the second poem...constructed as a "count up" form.
Harmony - 12 Aug 12
Angel voice
Giving my Soul
New words to sing
Relief from the competition
Old contestants
Scurry for the shade
Harmony ~ songs of Love
Now fill my thoughts
She touches me
With warmth
For inspiration
A flame is lit
And
Angel
Gives me a smile and a song
I think it works rather well. Maybe more poems like this will appear soon. Thank you Muse.
this is lovely and complements the first poem beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ that is really what I was hoping ♥
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