A new poem wandered into my mind, with gentle encouragement from Muse, it grew fairly quickly and I present it here. The structure of a "count down" wasn't actually intended originally but I felt that it was good and I continued till it was complete.
Competition - 12 Aug 12
Emptiness tried to claim me
Loneliness was already here
Between them
The melancholy choir
Was complete
Cobwebs on unused dreams
Did nothing but collect dust
And hide the light
From my eyes
Felt that all I saw
All I felt
Was all
Began to hear
New music
And then an Angel sang
Getting a feeling that this is the first poem of a pair ~ it this is the case, then part two will appear before too long, I hope.
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this gave me shivers when i read it ~ soooo beautiful! absolutely stunning! i can't wait to see the next one!
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Lovely comment dani ♥ thank you ~ the next poem is here now [see above]
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