This poem was presented to me in two parts with an instruction from Muse to put them together as one; I only have a faint awareness of what it is about so will not be trying to explore the meanings, I just present it to you here.
Carnival - 25 May 11
Evening shatters daylight glimmers
Carries the fragments
To the stars
Shadows remain
Come out to play
Where once did day
Upon the waves
Skip lightly
Carnival of stones
Watchers dreaming
On the shore
While fiddlers annoy
The hermit
In the dark
I can see some of the references but really cannot say what it all means. Muse sometimes plays games with my mind - I don't mind if something interesting comes out of it.
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this is unlike anything of yours that i can recall. we don't always have to know the full meaning, do we?
ReplyDelete"Evening shatters daylight glimmers
Carries the fragments
To the stars"
beautiful!
as cloud people
ReplyDeletewatch the reflections
they cast
upon the earth
in pools of water
everywhere
at night
they talk
as they float
playing
hiding and seek
with the stars
Hello dani ♥ I think that authors are "supposed" to have an understanding of what they wrote - obviously I am mistaken ☺
ReplyDeleteThank you for your lovely comments ♥
Hello June ♥
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Whispers in the night
games played - starlight moon dancing
resting only at dawn
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Thank you for your beautiful comment ♥