During most of the evening [of 17 Sep] the word "Midnight" had been wandering around in my mind but I could not find anything with which to associate it. At about 02:00, however, this poem started to grow, almost fully formed and with a couple of really minor alterations is what you see here.
Midnight - 18 Sep 12
Midnight
A whispered prayer
Gossamer thoughts
Fragrant ideas born
Of things in shadowed memories
Shadowed memories of
Midnight
Ideas held suspended
In places
Where light seldom goes
Light plays
In fevered memories
Midnight
Times when old thoughts
Seldom play
Play the games
From when we were young
And dreamt that
Midnight
Was somewhere we could go
Somewhere in our thoughts
A secret place
We always held hands
And held the thoughts of
Midnight
I rather like the way that the word "Midnight" wanders through the poem and that the first line of each stanza contains an echo of the last line of the preceding one.
this is one of my favorite poems of yours EVER, Ainsley! truly stunning! i like the repetition of 'midnight' throughout and, as you say, the echoes of previous lines in each new stanza. ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ your comments are always welcomed and appreciated.
DeleteSo happy that you liked this poem ♥