Tuesday, 22 May 2012

Far Side


After rather a long pause, Muse offered a change in direction.  This took a little while to come to fruition and the result feels promising, what do you think?





Far Side  -  18 & 22 May 12


From the far side
Of now
We watched

Stars danced
A gavotte
For our pleasure

Flurry ~ skirts twirled
A moment
Frozen in our eyes

Fleeting movement
Bagatelle danced
Brief gentle wordless song

Whispered Love
Inviting
Calling us

Feet hardly move
We
Joined the dance





I think that these changes hold an interest and can be explored, thank you Muse.
 
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4 comments:

  1. i would love to join the dance!

    beautiful!

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    1. I would Love to have you in the dance with me dani ♥
      Thank you for your lovely comments dani ♥ I really appreciate them ♥

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  2. Awesome poem :) I myself have had a blank mind for my poems & short stories.

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    1. Hello Teresa ♥ thank you for your lovely comment ♥
      It is great when Muse stirs and brings inspiration for a new piece isn't it?

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