This poem has been waiting to be properly formed for several days, only the first stanza had been written. This afternoon the remaining parts finally came together for me.
Between... - 12 Mar 11
Standing on the edge
Between dream
And awake
Feeling your touch
Deep within me
Walking
In the empty places
Where no one ever goes
We talk
Smile...hold hands
Along the shore
Where waves
Kiss our feet
And where we feel the Moon
Kiss our Souls
In all these places
I feel you with me
Holding me
Loving me
As I love you
Love poetry shows up at odd moments and feels really satisfying when it does.
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"And where we feel the Moon
ReplyDeleteKiss our Souls"
is one of the loveliest lines i've ever read. and
"Walking
In the empty places
Where no one ever goes"
beautiful!
whether it's you, your muse or the combination, your love poetry is always a song of love.
Thank you dani ♥ for a really beautiful comment ♥ I am so very pleased that my words have triggered such a lovely response from you - thank you again ♥
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