Hello

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I had worked on this poem for quite a while but was not totally satisfied with how it felt. 

I showed it to the one special person and she suggested a few amendments, the version that appears here encorporates those amendments. 

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Hello     -     05 Jan 20 

Hello 

So many people 

Have written songs with that 

Simple salutation 

I have read a lot of them 

And they are beautiful 

But I never felt that what 

I wanted to say 

Would convey the same feeling 

And then you turned to me 

Smiled 

And said 

Hello 

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I give thanks to the one special person for the assistance. 

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