Saturday, 20 February 2016

On The Sand

This is probably a reworking of something I wrote years ago.

On The Sand  -  01 Feb 16

Words mingle
With abandoned shells
Echo of the memory
Of the sea

I wrote on the sand
A message
Which only you
And the sea would read

Waves carried words
To take them to you
So you could read
What once was on the sand

I feel that this version is better than the first one.

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