The opening line of this poem had been in my mind for a couple of days, though I had no idea where it was leading me...till yesterday, when more started to grow and the end result I now present here.
Cloister Cemetery in the Snow Caspar David Friedrich [1810]
The Cloister Bell - 24 Nov 11
The Cloister bell …Cracked… Rang in discord Across the endless snow …Muffled… Crows, rooks and ravens In funereal waed Cluster round The fresh dug grave Eye the stones With their worn-out words Unread through ages Hooded eyes watch With predatory air
Landscape mocks White on black The mourners Black on white
A solitary scarlet rose Cast upon the ground Mocks blood Soon hidden by the snow Ignored by the birds
Then silence Save the Cloister bell Tolling
One word may need to be explained ~ Waed [pronounced “weed”] is an Old English word meaning, “garment”. It still is in use, with the spelling "weed", in the phrase "widow's weeds" referring to the mourning clothes.
I thank my Muse for hinting so strongly about what I needed to do for this poem.
This is my offering for: http://dversepoets.com/2011/11/29/openlinknight-week-20/
I was watching some tracks on YouTube when a few words heard, or probably misheard, triggered some words of my own to start to come together in my mind. This is an antithesis of the usual love poems that have been appearing here, I just feel that my brain wanted to scribe something different.
Fading Dreams - 21 Nov 11
Fading dreams A handful of petals Crumbling now… In my pocket the thorns Remind me Blood on my fingertips I taste the salt
Dawn was not a release Cloud smudged the sun Night held on To the thoughts That birthed the Dreams Spewed them into the morning
Dreams are all I really had Once shining bright Now tattered, tarnished Cast to rust Across the ground I rise into the cold Followed by the fading dreams
I hasten to say here that this poem is in no way autobiographical and nothing should be read into these words except the random triggering that my Muse offers.
This is my offering for... http://dversepoets.com/2011/11/22/open-link-night-week-19/
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