New poems

I felt that it was necessary to create a new blog to post some of my poetry and prose for evaluation, posh way of saying "This is what I wrote, what do you think?"


Pre-dawn - senryu

Stars in a pale sky
Honeysuckle scent fills air
I wait for the dawn

Image by ~Mclaire~ via Flickr

Cloud Night - senryu

In the moon dark night
Foxes roam the streets, questing
Stars shrouded by cloud

Image by Eric Bégin via Flickr

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