This was an unexpected result of posting the #mindfulwriting post on Dolphin Ainsley [a WordPress blog] today. The original text of the post is highlighted in italic in the version here and both make, I feel, for interesting reading.
See what you think and comment if you will.
Unexpected Touch - 13 Jan 13
An unexpected touch
In the cool of morning
When you came to me
Exploring
Mental fingers
Played across my body
Taking thoughts … lifting
Sharing
Stroking memories
Warming them again
Till they glowed in my mind
Warming
Reawakening our connection
Shared moments together
Moments of laughter and of Love
Shining
… Waiting to see you …
… Wanting to see you …
… Longing to see you …
… Again …
I really feel that both versions work and definitely thank Muse for her inspiration.
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