Afternoon Bay

A weather observation during a visit to Penzance [Cornwall, UK] on a rather chill day.





Afternoon Bay  -  02 Feb 15

Looking out across the bay
The distant shore
Fading out behind the hail
Hard rain arrives
Gulls hide and fools walk
Puddles on the road
Discarded messages
From the clouds





Interesting little point, the last three lines could make a good modern Haikū . . .

Puddles on the road
From the clouds
Discarded messages

In The Bay

This is a modern Haiku.





In The Bay  -  16 Dec 13

Preceeded by the tide
The mist rolls in
Across the bay





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