Wednesday 29 October 2014

Dark Dawn


A little experiment in two-word lines with each word a single syllable, just to see how it feels.






Dark Dawn  -  24 Oct 14

Dark day
Cloud fall
Rain fall

Cloud rain
Touch ground
Dark sky

Morn came
No change
Still dark

Cloud walk
Wet clothes
Dream dry




Actually it feels good.

2 comments:

  1. this is amazing, Ainsley! i LOVE the rhythm produced by this format/pattern. you certainly are not limited by form!

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    1. I try not to be limited in any way and by anything.

      I am really happy that you Love this poem dani ♥

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