A little experiment in two-word lines with each word a single syllable, just to see how it feels.
Dark Dawn - 24 Oct 14
Dark day
Cloud fall
Rain fall
Cloud rain
Touch ground
Dark sky
Morn came
No change
Still dark
Cloud walk
Wet clothes
Dream dry
Actually it feels good.
this is amazing, Ainsley! i LOVE the rhythm produced by this format/pattern. you certainly are not limited by form!
ReplyDeleteI try not to be limited in any way and by anything.
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I am really happy that you Love this poem dani ♥
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