Friday 27 March 2015

Intent


I really do not know how to describe this poem, except with the possible "you are being watched by you" but even that does not quite feel valid.





Intent  -  19 Mar 15

The eye of tomorrow
Watches intently
Sees every move
Especially those which
Have not yet been made
Intent watching
Knows your hidden thoughts
Suggests intention
Then watches






Whatever the tag, I feel that the poem works.

 

2 comments:

  1. OH, YES, THIS WORKS! A FASCINATING CONCEPT!

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    1. Thank you dani ♥ for your comment and confirmation that this poem has a working concept ♥

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